oooooooh I can almost feel the burn of the lashes on my own back!
This time, Arthur choked on whatever noise was to come out of his throat. For a moment, he stopped breathing entirely, chest movements caught in a terrifying limbo as the whip whistled through the air again.
CRACK
“Argh!” Arthur cried out. Merlin flinched back from the sound, as did many in the crowd below, watching.
That's my favourite part! It's very realistic... where you lose control of your reactions, and as much as you might try to compose yourself in order to control the situation, that whip just keeps cracking, taking it from you.
*cough*
Not that I'd know...
*shifty eyes*
Anyhoo... is it too nasty for me to say I want to see more Flogged!Arthur?
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Date: 2009-10-26 12:36 am (UTC)I can almost feel the burn of the lashes on my own back!
This time, Arthur choked on whatever noise was to come out of his throat. For a moment, he stopped breathing entirely, chest movements caught in a terrifying limbo as the whip whistled through the air again.
CRACK
“Argh!” Arthur cried out. Merlin flinched back from the sound, as did many in the crowd below, watching.
That's my favourite part! It's very realistic... where you lose control of your reactions, and as much as you might try to compose yourself in order to control the situation, that whip just keeps cracking, taking it from you.
*cough*
Not that I'd know...
*shifty eyes*
Anyhoo... is it too nasty for me to say I want to see more Flogged!Arthur?