This was amazing! I've had a really hard time finding anything at all to offer crit about...
The only thing i really remarked upon, is that in my very personal opinion, Merlin wouldn't be so... forward... in talking about sex. He could very well be the best cocksucker in the realm, but I truly don't see him as the person to talk about it.
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Date: 2009-10-10 06:35 pm (UTC)The only thing i really remarked upon, is that in my very personal opinion, Merlin wouldn't be so... forward... in talking about sex. He could very well be the best cocksucker in the realm, but I truly don't see him as the person to talk about it.
But that's really a matter of opinion. :o)